I wrote a song but I don't know how good it really is

[fabrice21]

"What's My Name?"

What the hell is wrong with me? I'm not who I want to be
I tired spot cream an' I tried it all I'm crawling up the wall!

What's my name naaaame...naaaame....naaaame....

I tried to join a ping-pong club, sign on the door said all full up!
I got nicked, fighting in the road an' the judge didn't even know

What's my name

Dad go pissed so I got clocked
Couldn't hear the Tannoy so he lost the lot
Offers Mum a bribe through the letter box
Drives you fucking mad

Now I'm round the back of your house at night
Peeping in the window - are you sleeping tight?
I laugh at your locks with my celloid strip
An' you won't know who came

What's my name?

[/B] english is not my mother tounge...I think it's in E, works in E.

 

[shahran]

Keep writing..

Honest words. Good job!

 

[fabrice21]

Keep writing..

Honest words. Good job!

strummer /Jones circa 1977

 

[fabrice21]

strummer /Jones circa 1977

Both of you score one point for replying

This is one of mine

give ME ALL OF YOUR
Give me all of your love
Whatever you try to give
Please give me your heart

Once i tried to catch your heart
I made it clear strait from the start
Now i want to win your love
Whatever you try to give
Well give me your heart

Give me
All of your love
Give me
All of your heart
Give me
Whatchou got
Please give me your heart

Well i dont know what to do
To make you understand
My feelings are True
I want u and no one else

You.re so much bêtter than all the rest

Solo

Repeat Chorus

yell


Give me