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[Edwin]

Hi all, this is our songwriting collective's 2nd release. Our attempt at a moody, vibing track.
Please have a listen and let us know what you think!

https://youtu.be/MdzrJWEzMgM

Cheers.

Edwin

 

[JabSTAR]

Not enough works done on it! The piano is not convincing... needs to be more heartfelt. The lyrics/melody/singing is a mash up of part M-pop /part Gospel .. Needs to rework the lyric/melody line .. Cheers!

 

[Edwin]

Thanks JabSTAR for your comments. I get the points you are making.
We will keep working at it!